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A fanfic based off the "December love" song by Gackt. Goku and Gackt are spending Christmas together, but do so miss each other. (lemon in later chapters!!!)

Gackt is a vampire. Goku will soon become his biotch. Typical vamp. love story with an awesome theme song.

Tatiana's only eight years old, but she is very unique......

A girl goes through life facing strange unusual things. But what more would you expect from a wolrd that thinks everyoen who wears all black is a satanic goth?

Poem of losing someone to suicide.

Just pure smut. Want to see Vegeta as a very dominant uke? Goku/Vegeta

A visit to the doctor's.

This could be considered an alternative version of Desecration. WARNINGS: Torture, violence, bondage, humiliation, Master-slave, Dom., oral, language. (And in next chapters: Fisting, anal, DP, rim,threesome...)

Cian feels like her life is falling apart. And her friends abandoning her are not helping the situation. She feels alone in the galaxy and thinks there’s only one thing to do.

I've been in a really bad mood today and when i'm in a bad mood I feel like no one likes me and that things are worst then they are.

Vegeta gets revenge in a twisted way. Yaoi, bondage, humiliation, mention of torture. Vegeta/Goku/??

Inspired by a picture, slight EDxEnvy, only a mention of it. full summary inside

CHAPTER FOUR!! Warnings: Lemon!! Goku has made some discoveries about himself the first time he ascended.

This is a tutorial instructing how to create a pattern and apply it to an image in PhotoShop. Specifically it shows how to create a scan line pattern and then effectively apply it to an existing image.

Poem number 3 from my creative writing class...This is one of those pieces of writing that just kind of, came, to me. Alot of the lines in this are kind of cryptic, but I just loved the language. I also love villanelle's in general; the form fits my natural language (Heidinese as my TA calls it) very well :wacko:

This is my first poem from my creativ writing class. We just moved out of poetry and I thought it was a good time for me to post these. This is a poem describing a scene we encountered over our summer. It's all about descripition and image usage, so there's no rhyme. Don't worry, I've got more poems coming!

ehh welll just read and you'll know what it's about

umm a lil thing I just did in pure bordom...

Lewis Mallory is a man diagnosed with terminal brain cancer. This is the story of Lewis retracing his life and preparing for his impending death.

Goku is an average teenager, innocent and cheerful, but when he meets his idol, Vegeta, something terrible will happen and he won't be the same happy boy.