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bad day

its pretty self explanatory

Stupid teens decide to make wishes so dumb that they're almost briliant. Let the adventure begin!

A short poem that I wrote 01/04/06, lost, then found again the first week of July. Unfortunatly I cant remember what I was feeling/going through when I wrote it, but I can tell that this poem is about my deep feelings at the time. Hope you enjoy!

A parody of the classical fairytales. Featuring Vegeta as prince Charming and Gogu as a 'damsel' in distress. Warnings: Shounen-ai, sappiness and lots of OOC.

Vegeta reflects about pride. Light shounen-ai Goku-Vegeta

A drabble of my whim

I re-submitted this story (or rather the story so far) as I have edited it quite a bit since the first draft. This is going to turn out to be quite a project, as I have already fixed upon various plot twists and turns. I hope you enjoy it. As I add to it I'll update on PD. Enjoy!

naraku is dead.........we have a new born.....what could go wrong? Inuyasha and kagome are about to find out........

A boy whos life is turned upside down in dramatic accident. He knows nothing of his real past. But with all the odd stuff happening he will soon be pulled into a whirlpool of his forgotten memories.

Short Veronica Mars AU Story. Sometime after solving her bestfreinds murder, Veronica finds herself solving a bizarre string of murders.

I really don't know where I come up with my writings but i really like how they turn out, this one is what I think makes a person but i don't mind if you lot don't think the same

We've all received these kind of Emails. Maybe some of you out there can empathize.

Okay I want on a chat site once and this guy was telling me how we should all be good and I said that we should be half good and half bad but go on one side if we want to and this is what we said (the last bit goddess said wasn't said to the man)

For millenia men have strived to understand women. They have baffled us for so long, I thought it was time to reveal a few of woman's more closely guarded secrets.

What if the Kyuubi destrode all of the Uchihas but Sasuke and Sasuke's last name is changed from Uchiha to Uzumaki and is Naruto's brother? Holy moly this is going to get interseting. This was first posted on fanfiction.net by me so I'm not stelling this story.

Wrote this when I was 15

I wrote this when I was 15

I wrote this when I was 13

The tobacco industry gets a vicious padding for the harm they are doing to the health of the nation. I think the greasy fast food franchises should get the same.