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Two limericks I wrote when I was just nine... about three centuries ago.

Just poking a little fun at the culinary oddities that can be enjoyed (sic) in my motherland. No offense intended.

This is a poem about the day I lost everything

Bombalurina and Rum Tum Tugger are finally becoming mates!

A quick little depressing poem about how we need to savour every second we live, because life goes by so quick!

Here I have taken bona fide words from the dictionary and added my own definitions. Hope you like some of them...

This is my story. i am a sound ninja. Don't get in my way are you die. This is my story.

this really does explain its self but jsut something i wrote late one night

A Poem about a character I play in an RPG with a friend..consider this from her point of view...If I was her

Another poem I wrote when I was bored

Just a poem about...Poetry lol

After writing the VERY short limerick "Chernobyl National Park", I decided I'd stay on a similar theme, reminding ourselves of the terrible hurt we have caused our world, particularly how we have soiled it and all but used up her non-renewable resources such as fossil fuels. This one is entitled "Grave New World", a little play on words (Aldous Huxley wrote a book called "Brave New World"). Hope you enjoy it, even if it is a little bleak.

Aboutmy little brother I lost when i was 10...got brought up with my friend and decided to write about it...

This poem was originally written for a 'Nightmare Poem' contest on DA. Unfortuantly, I didnt win, but that may have been because my poem wasnt a nightmare; the things in this poem can become very very real. Hope ya like, its one of my favorites ^-^

A Poem...thing.......about a time.....yeah...just read

Inuyasha fanfiction. AU. Hojo, a high school teacher, hires a teenage student to watch over the Higurashi temple. But what's the secret? And can the boy survive it? OC,M/F(KagxOC),Lime dark & demented

Jemima has always had a huge crush on Munkustrap, the leader of the Jellicles. But the problem is, Munkustrap has a girlfriend! What's a Queen to do in a situation like this?

Here is a rare thing: a deadly serious limerick. Forgive me if this blurb is considerably longer than the poem itself, but an explanation is necessary for those readers who are too young to remember the disaster which occured in the Ukraine on the 26th April 1986. On that date, there was an explosion in a major nuclear power plant equivalent to 150 Hiroshimas. Hundreds of thousands of people lost their lives. This is by far tragic enough. However, a lot of people give little thought to how such manmade catastrophies affect not only the human race but also the natural world around us. This limerick sums it up in simple words.

A boy is abodoned by his family for what happened to him when he was little. Now a red fox finds him in the woods and becomes the boy's brother. What will happen in their adventures? This is another story that was first posted on fanfiction.net by me so I'm not stealing.

I wanted to do a story on kitty's powers, when she first gets them oh and if u look closly at the pic u'll see it's the same as my icon, only bigger