Writing Critique Requested
Romeo and Kelli
A story about a girl in middle school who has it all. Looks, talent in acting, and possibly the hottest kid in school as her boyfriend. Until one horrible day...
The Methods of Apt. H
IYFG1Q 2plc BestDrama&BestAction. A psycho is stalking highschool girls and Inu fears it's Naraku's plot to kill Kagome. Can Inu or the detectives stop the murderer before Kagome is next? Or is she doomed from the start? ShippoxOC m/m,KohakuxKagura N/C (Inuyasha fanfiction, not AU or lemon but contains strong adult themes)
Shylah's Revenge
A vampire's tale. Shylah tells her life story as a daywalker; destined to rule over all vampires.
Twano's Rocket Ship
I could never hope to come close to the genius of Theodor "Dr. Seuss" Geisel, but I like to try and emulate his style in my poetry for children. Here is a little thing about an inventor who could have made a name for himself if he only had the correct materials!
Every Precious Minute
A little romantic poem any of you are free to use on your significant other on Valentine's Day :)
Alone
This was written some years ago and it is copyrighted to me. It is intended for a collection of mine that will be published some day.
Shippo's Dragon
Full Title: Shippo's Little Asymmetric Dragon. An Inuyasha fanfic. It covers Shippo's life from his teens tol his twenties. The gist is that as a young boy Shippo develops an obsession about getting tattooed on by a woman. As time passes, secretly, he finds a willing female participant and his dreams come true -- unfortunately he suffers a very disturbing demise. It's not angst, but it's dark and disturbing, and psychologically warped. (Shippo x Souten)