Writing Critique Requested

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    Release Me, My Dearest Friend.

    Oneshot, Heavy Slash, Spider-Man. Peter and Harry have had a silent agreement for years that no matter what, they'd come to eachother for certian things.

    Last updated Dec 3, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    Always

    Once again, Kagome is fed up with Inuyasha and heads home. But when she comes back, he is NOT the first person she sees...

    Last updated Dec 2, 2007
    Total Chapters 14
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    Versus Poeticus

    Poetical Verse, an original collection of Latin poetry with translation

    Last updated Dec 2, 2007
    Total Chapters 2
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    Brighter then the Sun

    Intro to my novel. It introduces how the protagonist becomes a villain.

    Last updated Nov 1, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    my true love

    stoory about love, loving, hate, etc,

    Last updated Oct 28, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    A Moldy Tome

    A boy learns something about himself and occasionally wishes he hadn't bothered. Prequel to Diablo II: Lord of Destruction.

    Last updated Oct 28, 2007
    Total Chapters 3
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    Aquarius

    "Summer always was my favorite season." One girl speaks of her love of summer rain...

    Last updated Oct 22, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    L.O.V.E.

    love passion and kindness

    Last updated Oct 22, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    September 11, 2001

    Sorrow Darkness and a reminder of our pasts.

    Last updated Oct 22, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    An Unexpected Love

    Sesshoumaru has become frustrated with Inuyasha. The hanyou's constant abandonment and harsh words toward Kagome have worn down his nerves and resolve. What happens when he finally decides to take action?

    Last updated Oct 21, 2007
    Total Chapters 10
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    Raditz and Company

    Raditz, Nappa, and Vegeta travel to earth to look for a guy named kakarot... But end up on the wrong side of the EARTH!!! How will they live in America?

    Last updated Oct 20, 2007
    Total Chapters 2
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    Sweet Dreams Super Saiyan

    Love passion romance kindness

    Last updated Oct 15, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    Chemical Bonding

    a twist on basic chemical facts. how can you sit through a class talking about chemical attraction and not seize the opportunity? nothing risque, nothing gained, eh? tell me if its too mature. its nothing explict, i just dont know what the standards are

    Last updated Oct 5, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    Nightmare

    Just a nightmare. And reality.

    Last updated Sep 29, 2007
    Total Chapters 2
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    Smoky Little Rituals

    Originally non-fiction but it fits several of my characters very well. I rather like this piece and feel it's one of my best shorts.

    Last updated Sep 24, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    The Call To Adventure

    This is my main work, filled with prophesy, witches, fae, and meddling gods. The world is much like our own, but the supernatural lays over everything like oil on water, waiting for the moment to spill out into the open. Creatures are waking, the Sidhe walk this world again, and our not-so-daring heroes have no idea what is about to come crashing down on their heads.

    Last updated Sep 22, 2007
    Total Chapters 5
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    Imprisoned

    My first short poem in English.

    Last updated Sep 6, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    From Dark to Light

    The lone traveler finds herself being pulled from the horribly twisted reality that she had known for so long to be thrust into a completely foreign one.

    Last updated Aug 30, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    M*51: Song Collection

    Basically a collection of the songs and poems I've composed in the past year or so. No particular consistency of theme as much as each song and poem originally stands by itself.

    Last updated Aug 30, 2007
    Total Chapters 1
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    Trouble

    Harry is coming home to Hogwart for his Sixth year of Schooling and Find out he has a Twin Baby Sister. What happens when His Twin Sister thinks the Potions Teacher Needs to Give her big brother the Benefit of the Doubt. Read and Find Out.

    Last updated Aug 28, 2007
    Total Chapters 2