Writing Critique Requested

Written for the Hero21 mailing list's drabble game. Shippou thinks about what is really important. SPOILERS for events in the manga from chapter 463 forward. An older drabble originally posted 7/23/06 at other sites.

Adrian wants to do all he can to uphold his foster father's ideals and plans. When he stumbles into the enemy's headquarters, though, there is more than one surprise waiting...

My entry in Forthright's 'Feudal Fables Challenge'. It's a dramatization of the events surrounding Rin's first encounters with Sesshoumaru.

A poem about loss, gain, and everything in between. Short and hopefully right to the point. This poem was absolutely screaming to be written, so here it is. :) I would LOVE crits; please oh please :yes:

Shaadiv is a world swathed in mystery and shadow. It is also home to the pleasure gorgon, a demon with the ability to seduce mortals and feed upon their sexual energies. A young pleasure gorgon, Nehrashti, has his life turned upside down when he is taken from his family at an early age to become a concubine for the Gorgon Queen Hahtra Abi Bhevya. What is in store for the demon-boy taken from all he knows and forced to placate his fickle mistress?

a short drabble writtin during lecture. Inuyasha and Kagome have a talk about Kikyo.

[Harry Potter] How long is ten years?

Hellsing romantic fanfiction

Intense fire turns to vampyric sadomasochism

When the young High Templar , Vendrevin, begins to have vivid dreams about a coming catastrophic war he set off to investigate. His first stop is Sebalia, deep in the demon wold of Shaadiv, with in the halls of the pleasure-gorgon king, Lord Nehra Shrivastava. With his friend Ha-Ha, a fairy, in tow he braves the dark of the demon world and the potentially deadly thrall of the gorgon king. However, when Vendrevin arrives he discovers the gorgon King is not all that he's cracked up to be. Or is he?

The things they don't prepare you for are usually the hardest lessons to learn.

Chad and Ichigo and a bond founded on a promise.

Following Ch470, Sesshoumaru becomes unhinged in a way he did not expect. With the sword unable to revive souls more than once, can he, by pretending she lives, bring her back?

Miroku kept waking up & finding that his clothes were disheveled. He suspected a woman was molesting & raping him in the middle of the night, while he slept. But when it wasn't Sango or Kagome, who could it be? What could it be? Bestiality.

Book One of "The Half Moon Personified" series. The cover art is by Hug-a-Cactus on photobucket. This is a very unique sort of Naruto fanfic.

A man with questions inevitably goes to their place of origin. The story of a mercenary prince, a beautiful machine, and a peaceless guardian, on a journey after answers to questions too deep to ignore. Vegeta, 18, Piccolo

The death of a loved one not only brings pain; secrets. hiden feelings, old wounds, resentment can be exposed. Warnings for the first chapter: Death of a character, angst. Vegeta/Goku

Tried something new for a change but i'm not so sure if i want to write like this in the future... I need to think what i'm writing for christ sake =D This poem is all about some personal issues i have bottled up within me, and writing them down "kinda" helps. *Edit: since i'm so good at english, i had to add description for some of the words... 'Yknow, the starred ones? ^.^;; *

A One-Shot of the events that took place before "The Half Moon Personified", which is in Red Curtain.

Also Caroline's POV. This one might also pop up in my story, as it seems like something Caroline might use to explain why she's so serious about the way she lives.