Comment 21486

Comment ID 21486

[Art] .:Winry Rockbell
AnimeBoyToyKoibito
Dec 23, 2005, 9:19:58 AM UTC | Total Edits: 1 | Last edited on Dec 23, 2005 by AnimeBoyToyKoibito on [Art] .:Winry Rockbell
Hmmmm... I think everything looks fine, other than the fact that everything seems to be blowing to the right except for the hair in the back. Thats the only thing, everything is great. Good job. Big Smile

~~ Actually I just looked back the breasts seem s abit uneven. Then if your having her hips turn to the side, which is what it looks like, then you should try to make the left of her hip a tad bit wider. Yes

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  • themusicdied
    Dec 23, 2005, 2:14:04 PM UTC
    Okay, for the first thing wrong I have a reason! I was trying to make it look like the wind was swirling around her. I've now worked on some leaves to be swirling too and you can see it a lot easier.

    *sobs* I only noticed that after I posted. I promise I'll fix it when I color her. I REALLY appricate you pointing both out to me!! ^o^
    • AnimeBoyToyKoibito
      Dec 24, 2005, 7:54:52 AM UTC
      Oooooo Ok Then I shall wait for the leaves to see how that works out. Grin

      Of course!! That is what critiques are for!!

      Love
      ~~Mellie