.:Winry Rockbell

Posted Dec 23, 2005, 4:51:59 AM UTC

I promised a Christmas art and I made sure I pushed myself into it! I'm sorry it's kinda a bit messy. I slammed my hand in the door my my mom's Tahoe (Tahoe= my mom's car) and to even hold a pencil was a task to behold.

Second, I'm trying REALLY hard to get just a tiny bit better at my art. I would truly appricate any help if anyone could let me know if there's anything really off with this. Please? ^^

Hope you all like!! =^o^=

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Dec 28, 2005, 2:13:19 PM UTC
woohoo! it's wenry from fma!!! that's awesome, i don't know if anyone brought it up or not, but her nose is a little too centered. the anime nose should always be to the slight side, in this case you should reverse the diagonal line from right to left and put it a littl more to the left. ^^ besides that and the already brought up things this picture it awesome! i really like it!
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MoonDemon
Dec 23, 2005, 10:58:47 AM UTC
I likes....and the only things wrong I noticed were what AnimeBoyToy already mentioned to you.

I feel your pain for the door slam, I had to purposely shove my hand in my truck door to keep my older son's hand from getting slammed by his dad, talk about PAIN
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- themusicdied
  Dec 23, 2005, 2:11:34 PM UTC
  Thank you!
  
  It really hurts, no? My sister said, and I quote, "It couldn't have hurt that much!". It couldn't have hurt that much my ass! XD
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  MoonDemon
  Dec 23, 2005, 4:46:12 PM UTC
  I think I would have smacked her for that comment if she was one of my sisters, LOL. Then said it back!
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  themusicdied
  Dec 23, 2005, 6:46:56 PM UTC
  LOL! I just kind of looked at her like "Yeah, you're an ass.". Same as I always do. She trys to pick fights. I just stopped caring! I'm such a horrid person.
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  MoonDemon
  Dec 23, 2005, 7:38:54 PM UTC
  LOL, I was the fight-starter in the family until my little bros got bigger than me. which explains why I suggest the hitting part I thinks that makes you the good one and me a bad example
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  themusicdied
  Dec 24, 2005, 6:33:53 AM UTC
  See, It's only me and my sister as far as siblings go. And she's 13 years older then me. Though, every so often I can't take it any more. I don't hit her or anything but, man, I'm hell for verbal abuse when she pushes it just a little too far.
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  MoonDemon
  Dec 24, 2005, 11:19:15 AM UTC
  LOL, I got it now.
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AnimeBoyToyKoibito
Dec 23, 2005, 9:19:58 AM UTC | Total Edits: 1 | Last edited on Dec 23, 2005 by AnimeBoyToyKoibito
Hmmmm... I think everything looks fine, other than the fact that everything seems to be blowing to the right except for the hair in the back. Thats the only thing, everything is great. Good job.

~~ Actually I just looked back the breasts seem s abit uneven. Then if your having her hips turn to the side, which is what it looks like, then you should try to make the left of her hip a tad bit wider.
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- themusicdied
  Dec 23, 2005, 2:14:04 PM UTC
  Okay, for the first thing wrong I have a reason! I was trying to make it look like the wind was swirling around her. I've now worked on some leaves to be swirling too and you can see it a lot easier.
  
  *sobs* I only noticed that after I posted. I promise I'll fix it when I color her. I REALLY appricate you pointing both out to me!! ^o^
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  AnimeBoyToyKoibito
  Dec 24, 2005, 7:54:52 AM UTC
  Oooooo Ok Then I shall wait for the leaves to see how that works out.
  
  Of course!! That is what critiques are for!!
  
  Love
  ~~Mellie
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