Hey, I've had arkillian look at my story already, (which really was the intro chapter) but I need s'more crits! I've gottenin 2 new chapters, and if people like it or not, I must know. Adios...

P.S. What does "sticky post" and "locked thread" mean? :ponders:

Sure thing! Oh, and stickey posts are posts designated by the Admin (or sometimes mods) that are really imporant like rules and stuff so they are always on the top. Locked posts are threads in whitch the mod or admin decided was eather a)Inapropriate or b)Too important for people to just keep midlessly post and what not.