It's finally done. This project that's been eating me up for...well, ever... is finished. And edited. And now I'm cross-eyed.
Well, not really, but my head hurts and I'm done looking at this and drawing a blank at what to do after editing it. That's where I ask someone with a fresh take on it to critique, if you feel up to it.
I have it on 'Roast Me', but it's not drawing too much attention. I'm thinking it's because of the length; so fair warning, yes it's long.
Then again, I could be stroking my own ego and it just sucks...
http://www.paperdemon.com/writing/view/2430
Thanks in advance.
Jeni