I think this is in the right topic, but here it is. Chapter 1 of my new series, Attack of the Evil Boxer Shorts. Tell me what you all think of it so far. Here is the link to it http://www.paperdemon.com/storyview.php/id/1316.html

It's a little hard to comment on as yet- not alot has happened as yet, so there isn't alot of meat to chew on yet. Give it a few more bits of this length before asking again and I'll see what I think :)

Yeah the first chapter doesn't have a lot, but the next one has the super hero fight and the end, so that should do better.

*giggles* that should be entertaining.