Will someone please read and HONESTLY critique my original story entitled "Shylah's Revenge"? It's in the Red Curtain. It's still in it's rough copy, so may not be at its best.. but that's why I'm looking for reviews- so that I can better it when I go back to edit. It's a novel I've been working on for months and hoping to have it published one day-may even turn it into a series. :) I only have chapter one up right now, but plan to post several more chapters along the way...

Thanks ahead of time. P.S. I'll return the favor of reviewing your work. :)

If you could post a link here I'd be handy for people so we don't have to search for it :) I've had people ask the same thing and I couldn't find the story ^^; not cool...