Posted on Jan 7, 2021, 8:38:36 PM UTC
On Jan 4, 2021, BraveKnight said:
PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/BraveKnight
First-Time Design: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1INQ0rwzNgxu2J3RLWgtZuk9X7Ne7w9NA/view?usp=drivesdk
Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101175
Items: -
Design Notes: -
Special Note: I'm a first-time owner!
One more step! You have a handsome baby boy on your hands here, I love him! But there are a few corrections you'll need to do before we can approve this:
- Frosted should be lighter than the base coat!
- The base seems to of been taken from the Ivory sliders of Amber, instead of the Soil sliders! (These three in the middle!)
- Beak doesn't cover the minimum area, and needs to be expanded to cover the bridge of the nose along here.
- Blanket goes out of range for coverage along the wings and chest area. I t also doesn't fully cover the minimum range. I've highlighted the out of range areas in red, and where there needs to be more coverage in orange here.
- Tips crosses over into Dom Coverage at some points I've highlighted here.
- Unders peeks out coverage slightly next to the wing, highlighted here.
Once you've made the corrections, please reupload your Eláfkeri through the Design Corrections form in the forum.
-- DopeyOakeyNuts
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