Comment 154481
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I really like how you use words and break everything up, the text is very pleasant to read~
The scene you picked is a very good choice for my character, he does come off as a mocking idiot but would still help others if they need rescuing. I love how Caspian is bickering with him, it comes off as very natural and Ain would definitely react the way you depicted him.
Makes me think about how this would continue after they enter the portal together, love me some good food to think about! Thank you so much for including him, I'll definitely cherish this little story
The scene you picked is a very good choice for my character, he does come off as a mocking idiot but would still help others if they need rescuing. I love how Caspian is bickering with him, it comes off as very natural and Ain would definitely react the way you depicted him.
Makes me think about how this would continue after they enter the portal together, love me some good food to think about! Thank you so much for including him, I'll definitely cherish this little story
Comment ID 154481
ahhHH i'm so happy to hear that i was able to depict Ain in character. glad you like it. ♥
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