Comment 151891
Comment ID 151891
omg this so gooddd!!
I love this line: The witch doctor felt a new presence reaching out from the stars above, its enigmatic aura carried a message, a vision of a distant place.
This is so descriptive and has good word choice!!!
I love this line: The witch doctor felt a new presence reaching out from the stars above, its enigmatic aura carried a message, a vision of a distant place.
This is so descriptive and has good word choice!!!
I wasn't sure anyone besides the person, who approved the entry, was reading what I write, you surprised me pleasantly, I'm glad you found my short story good!