Comment 143855

Comment ID 143855

May 22, 2023, 8:31:53 PM UTC on [Writing] 1/2; a cheesy scheme - 342 words
I can't believe I didn't comment on this - I'm so sorry I've been so inactive!

Though I've reread the stories SO many times, and I absolutely adore it! Caspian's disregard for safety and almost... aloofness, combined with Finn's realistic and paranoid nature makes this perfect!

I adore how seamless and eloquent your writing is! Each sentence flows so well into the next, and I love these internal monologues!

Ugh, I'm gushing, but I love it! Thank you so much for including him!

Replies

  • May 23, 2023, 12:15:57 PM UTC
    you're absolutely fine! commenting is often difficult (at least for me it is hdfjg)

    ghhHHH you're making me blush you gremlin you > : ( hdsjfk thank you, it gives me joy to hear that you like them. thank you for letting me include him!