Roses

786

Posted Apr 16, 2006, 4:26:50 AM UTC

I actually drew this a while ago. =P Found it recently. I may color it... someday...

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1035
Jul 14, 2006, 3:28:50 AM UTC
Wow, this drawing is kinda kinky for some reason. ( is not a perv) >.<
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jeff
May 10, 2006, 12:11:03 AM UTC
yo skew what every one says about this work of art i think it look good as it is good job very nice work
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PookyWooky
Apr 17, 2006, 8:24:29 PM UTC
Lovely hair, but I believe her right arm seems a tad bit short. The roses and the rest seem awesome. Good job.
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- 786
  Apr 18, 2006, 10:44:41 PM UTC
  Thank you.
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ArkillianDragon
Apr 17, 2006, 2:21:09 AM UTC
What kind of crit would you like?
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- 786
  Apr 17, 2006, 5:09:54 PM UTC
  A truthful one. I know this piece isn't great. =/
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  ArkillianDragon
  Apr 18, 2006, 5:54:43 AM UTC
  Well, I see nothing wrong with your style- infact most pics people do are alright- just minor flaws get picked up by the eye and 'spoil' it ( I can't think of a better word ^^; )
  
  The profile of the head is a sort of squareish shape when simplified, ie- the ear is in the middle of the head (from face to back), and the front of the face to the ear is about the same distance as the back of the ear
  
  Shape would be a nice thing to have in this pose- not alot, but some more around her chest and thighs- unless she's 10 years old, theyre flat.
  
  One other thing, is the flow of the picture- is the rose suppose to cross her like it was ment to hurt her, or is it ment to compliment her? If its ment to be in conflict, then it needs to be level with her head,and further back to show the conflict. If it was ment to compliment, then if you line it up with her a little, or direct the rose toward her, it'll seem friendly (sorry if that made no sense- it's a minor layout thing)
  
  A few thoughts. They help some?
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  786
  Apr 18, 2006, 10:44:05 PM UTC
  Well, something I should have specified before hand. He is male. No breasts. I guess you could say he's androginous. ^^, The rose that comes forward was a little bit of an abstract moment I had.
  
  Other than that, it helped. ^^ Thanks.
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  ArkillianDragon
  Apr 19, 2006, 12:16:12 AM UTC
  Alright- in that case, it's a very femanine position, and it should be something to consider for the next picture, unless androgenous is what the person is. Men show sorrow or whatever emotion differently to females, and tend to not cry or look helpless unless they do feel completly helpless. For example- http://www.paperdemon.com/artview.php/id/4163.html The guy at the back is VERY emo in this picture cause he's confused to heck ( *cue evil cackle* ), but he isn't crying cause that would expose his weakness. They show composure and strength till they crack at the sides- all men. Some more than others. The roses are a nice effect, but they should still sybolise something about his struggle. Ummmm... an example of this, using the rose theme would be like this pic http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6405950/
  
  ... I've lost where I was going here I think... Oh well ^^;
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  786
  Apr 19, 2006, 5:36:47 AM UTC
  He's not really all that sad. =/ But yeah, he is the emotional type, as well as he is supposed to be androgenous in some pictures(such as this one).
  
  A lot of guys you know may not break down easily. To me, it depends on the person, not the gender; though, men do seem to more closed when it comes to emotions. My ex has been breaking down a lot lately. He acts more like a 14-year-old girl with a broken heart, crying almost constantly.
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  ArkillianDragon
  Apr 19, 2006, 3:24:39 PM UTC
  Yeah- broken hearted men when they start with emotion, they have built it up so long that it takes them ages to get over it. I think you'll be surprised to know how much even the open ones hold back. Do sympathise with them though if you can- they aren't use to dealing with emotions like females are. My friend broke up with his online g/f, txted me for a month constantly about his problem, and has just restarted his way of thinking. Seriously- they can't understand us, but they drive us insane by their fickleness when they do show it- colds are a prime example
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Cokekitty
Apr 16, 2006, 6:06:35 PM UTC
Very pretty. I think it'd look pretty spiffy if you colored it, too.
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