Miguel WIP

Posted Aug 10, 2009, 3:56:36 AM UTC

PLEASE: I don't post much here any more, but I'm seeking help with this one. Any would be GREATLY appreciated.

An old piece that never got finished. I'm going back and trying to finish it up, starting with cleaning up the line art. I'm looking for people to help me with this. Any critiques, help, and advice would be greatly appreciated!

What he's supposed to be: Spanish nobility. This isn't really strict to the Spanish-ness, aside from his appearance(skin, hair, build). It's from a fantasy-ish RP, so there's leeway and room to squirm. He's about 15-years-old and he's meant to be prettier than the average(or real) 15-year-olds. He is candy. Nom nom.

Anyway, two things that bother me are:
1. His left arm(viewer's right). It seems to vanish. I don't know if I need to give him more elbow room or if it doesn't look unnatural to others.
2. The stairs. That's a pretty bad place to put stairs, I'd think, but due to the position of his legs someone suggested them.

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  • Aug 11, 2009, 12:54:31 AM UTC
    Attached is a red line crit, but you should come back Smile No excuses! ^^

    Yeah- it was a pretty easy fix. Bend the knee and get rid of the stairs, and have the elbow under the arm going up the chair ^^
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