Comment 29434
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Well, I see nothing wrong with your style- infact most pics people do are alright- just minor flaws get picked up by the eye and 'spoil' it ( I can't think of a better word ^^; )
The profile of the head is a sort of squareish shape when simplified, ie- the ear is in the middle of the head (from face to back), and the front of the face to the ear is about the same distance as the back of the ear
Shape would be a nice thing to have in this pose- not alot, but some more around her chest and thighs- unless she's 10 years old, theyre flat.
One other thing, is the flow of the picture- is the rose suppose to cross her like it was ment to hurt her, or is it ment to compliment her? If its ment to be in conflict, then it needs to be level with her head,and further back to show the conflict. If it was ment to compliment, then if you line it up with her a little, or direct the rose toward her, it'll seem friendly (sorry if that made no sense- it's a minor layout thing)
A few thoughts. They help some?
The profile of the head is a sort of squareish shape when simplified, ie- the ear is in the middle of the head (from face to back), and the front of the face to the ear is about the same distance as the back of the ear
Shape would be a nice thing to have in this pose- not alot, but some more around her chest and thighs- unless she's 10 years old, theyre flat.
One other thing, is the flow of the picture- is the rose suppose to cross her like it was ment to hurt her, or is it ment to compliment her? If its ment to be in conflict, then it needs to be level with her head,and further back to show the conflict. If it was ment to compliment, then if you line it up with her a little, or direct the rose toward her, it'll seem friendly (sorry if that made no sense- it's a minor layout thing)
A few thoughts. They help some?
Comment ID 29434
![[Art] Roses](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_5634_054a410788d037f38165e78df5d2ecc65ebf732050256.jpg)
Well, something I should have specified before hand. He is male. No breasts. I guess you could say he's androginous. ^^, The rose that comes forward was a little bit of an abstract moment I had.
Other than that, it helped. ^^ Thanks.
Other than that, it helped. ^^ Thanks.
... I've lost where I was going here I think... Oh well ^^;
A lot of guys you know may not break down easily. To me, it depends on the person, not the gender; though, men do seem to more closed when it comes to emotions. My ex has been breaking down a lot lately. He acts more like a 14-year-old girl with a broken heart, crying almost constantly.