Chris: Chapter 1

Published Apr 2, 2008, 9:39:20 PM UTC | Last updated Apr 2, 2008, 9:39:20 PM | Total Chapters 1

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a poem I wrote for class about my little brother. :3

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Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chris

Chris

Sitting still;

poised for attack.

Fingers ready

on the trigger.

Concentration -

eyes on full alert.

Focused.

Trained.

An enemy

slips into view;

goes down fast -

too easy.

Gunshot

blares through speakers.

Electronic war

flickers on screen.

Little brother

concentrates on game -

Defeating

imaginary villains.

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