The Red Velvet Ribbon ( poem ): The Red Velvet Ribbon

Published Aug 5, 2005, 6:02:40 AM UTC | Last updated Aug 5, 2005, 6:02:40 AM | Total Chapters 1

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This is just a concrete poem I had to do for school, but I really like it and enjoyed doing it.

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Chapter 1: The Red Velvet Ribbon

Red Velvet Ribbon                                    By Tamm

 

Unbinding itself from an imperfect pose, slowly finding it's way to the ground. Twirling and twisting with no sound.
 


 

It is wavering to and fro surfing the breeze,
 

as if it was in a bottomless sea.
 


 

It is nearing the surface of the ground
 

It prays to itself it won't touch just yet.
 


 

It lands.
 

Motionless, it is set.
 

 

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