Comment 47000

Comment ID 47000

[Art] Broken Angel
Humority
Nov 24, 2006, 8:52:57 AM UTC | Total Edits: 1 | Last edited on Nov 24, 2006 by Humority on [Art] Broken Angel
It's not too dramatic at all.^^ I love the intensity of his face and the way he sits, I think you've done a great job drawing this.Yes
I don't have much to add to what arkillian said except that the darkness of his face bothers me. It's not supposed to be as dark as his coat, I'd suggest not using black in his face but lighter tones, maybe brown but not the same color as his hair.
Somehow I feel it would be even more powerful if the background was more saturated. Still, great job and a new fav definitely.Big Smile

Replies

  • Kekoura
    Nov 24, 2006, 9:58:50 AM UTC
    Thank u, every crit helps me! And i treasure them allWacko! Yes the line art is okay, its the coloring that throws me off. *i should have tried harderNo* i wanted the face to be the represantation of how far into the dark he's ventured, but i don't know if it capures it. Anything other that you catch?
    • Humority
      Jul 27, 2007, 1:58:00 AM UTC
      Hey there, sorry I didn't answer you, I forgot all about this^^;