This is a sketch of ani skywalker:jedi: that, out of boardome, i have colored. This was done quickly,and probably should not be in the 'finished' pile, but as i'm not going to touch it after this ..i guess it s finished? Moreover, feel free to be a harsh crit! Please, its the first time i've drawn him and i want to see if i got it right:innocent: Thank U!....I realise that the tile may be alittle too dramatic^.^;; again, i have no idea why he has 'magically-uselless' wings..:blink:..:question:
Constructive Critique requested.
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(Besides, I have no right to criticize because I rush everything I do. I'm probably the most impatient person on here...)
I don't have much to add to what arkillian said except that the darkness of his face bothers me. It's not supposed to be as dark as his coat, I'd suggest not using black in his face but lighter tones, maybe brown but not the same color as his hair.
Somehow I feel it would be even more powerful if the background was more saturated. Still, great job and a new fav definitely.
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Crit though? Althought the dirty look sort of suits the picture, you have lost out on details and textures with the way the colours are slapped on. Smooth areas like the face and clothing can be blurred, although some areas need to be sharp, but things like the hair need a bit of attention cause it's a glossy surface- it has sharper colour changes.
Also, The lighting is inconsistant- most of it is above him, but it's not enough to make a gloss where the light comes from- if something blocks the light, that needs to be a sharp shadow. Also the contrast between the shadows to light is too quick for what is shaded here. A high intensity shadow needs to be complimented by a high intensity light hitting it, where it nearly becomes a black and white picture. Alot of rules can be broken, but this can not. You need to toe most of your shadows down so that only the really dark areas are dark, and the other shadows are medium to compliment your light areas.
Uhhh- FYI for the next picture
I'm game if you ever need any more crit. I wont be kind about it, but I try not to be nasty either. Sometimes you just need to know how it stands
Oh, and i just left to frys and got a wacom tablet 6x8 graghire4...as a b-day presant R u phsycic by any chance?.. Weird..
And it was very ironic that i got a tablet at your cammand!LOL!
I suggest oekakis. I joined an oekaki board when I got my tablet and it's the BEST practice Lots of quick easy things Don't live on them, but it'll get you use to working with a tablet rather than a mouse
Sorry I can't be more helpfull than that ^^;