Comment 38250

Comment ID 38250

[Art] Dancing Doves
BogusRed
Jul 26, 2006, 10:30:26 PM UTC on [Art] Dancing Doves
Hi AnimeBoyToy,
You want a roast? You've got one!

This is going great so far. The poses are really nice. However, there are some porportional issues that should be resolved before moving to ink and color. I noticed that the heads are unusually large. It is common for artists to draw important things bigger than other parts. We often draw the eyes too big without realizing it because we are trying so hard to makethem look good. See the visual crit that I've attached to this comment.

Hope this helps
Image attached

Replies

  • AnimeBoyToyKoibito
    Jul 26, 2006, 10:35:55 PM UTC
    Oh Thank you very much! This helps me out alot! I felt that something was off about it, but I couldnt quite place my finger on it.
    Smile Thank you for the grand help!