Comment 32362

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BogusRed
May 21, 2006, 12:51:53 PM UTC
Hi Jill.

Here's a few things to watch out for (see attached image). Her left hand's pose is a little akward. The ball of the hand is tucked behind her body when from this perspective the ball of the hand should be seen.

It may be too late to fix the heads, but for your next drawing watch your head shapes. The backs of their heads are cut off a lot. I've outlined your head shapes in blue and a more natural head shape in red.
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Comment ID 32362

[Art] Request from Vincent Valentine
Jilly
May 23, 2006, 2:00:36 PM UTC on [Art] Request from Vincent Valentine
Thanks for the advice,Red Grin I'll be sure to make the changes before I ink it. and that new visual critique is really nifty Yes

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  • BogusRed
    May 23, 2006, 5:07:24 PM UTC
    yeah it comes in handy. glad i could help Big Smile