Comment 32145

Hi Jill.

Here's a few things to watch out for (see attached image). Her left hand's pose is a little akward. The ball of the hand is tucked behind her body when from this perspective the ball of the hand should be seen.

It may be too late to fix the heads, but for your next drawing watch your head shapes. The backs of their heads are cut off a lot. I've outlined your head shapes in blue and a more natural head shape in red.