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Wow thank you for the detailed comments. If you were saying that
is the crude one, then I agree. (i'm not quite sure which one you were talking about).
Are you saying that this latest one
is the one too focused on his face? I like the fact that the focus is on the upper part of the picture instead of the whole body.
Anyway, thank you again for the comments Eleanora.
is the crude one, then I agree. (i'm not quite sure which one you were talking about).Are you saying that this latest one
is the one too focused on his face? I like the fact that the focus is on the upper part of the picture instead of the whole body.Anyway, thank you again for the comments Eleanora.
Comment ID 15350
With the first one and meant the big pic, so it's just the other way around 
It find it a bit crude because of the lines you use to define the arms and face. The lines of the arms seem to me a bit too thick in comparison with the ethereal colours and the elfish character of Link (btw, is he an elf?, I can't remember...)Maybe you could make the lines a bit thinner and skecthier? Otherwise, I still think it's a beautiful pic! It's very sensual and the colours are lovely, just as in the other pics.
So the first small pic is the pic I think is a bit too focused on the face, which makes it less full of movement then the other two works.
I hope I've made it clearer now
It find it a bit crude because of the lines you use to define the arms and face. The lines of the arms seem to me a bit too thick in comparison with the ethereal colours and the elfish character of Link (btw, is he an elf?, I can't remember...)Maybe you could make the lines a bit thinner and skecthier? Otherwise, I still think it's a beautiful pic! It's very sensual and the colours are lovely, just as in the other pics.So the first small pic is the pic I think is a bit too focused on the face, which makes it less full of movement then the other two works.
I hope I've made it clearer now
Thanks for clarifying. Your comments are helpful.