Amazingggg!!! I just love these lines: "Her usual display of soft, eloquent hands were instead replaced by a thin layer of charred dirt crumbling away to reveal coarser hands, blistered and roughened." - "The girl gave a horrifying giggle that echoed through her ears, like a collection of a crowd cheering in malicious joy." You really did a good job at describing her hands and the girl's laugh!!! I love thisss!!!
I just love these lines: "Her usual display of soft, eloquent hands were instead replaced by a thin layer of charred dirt crumbling away to reveal coarser hands, blistered and roughened." - "The girl gave a horrifying giggle that echoed through her ears, like a collection of a crowd cheering in malicious joy."
You really did a good job at describing her hands and the girl's laugh!!! I love thisss!!!