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Comment 139371
Comment ID 139371
Wyverntoots
Jan 30, 2023, 9:50:25 AM UTC
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[Writing] Occupational Hazard
I love this. I love Paiko. This is amazing
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Scatteriskity
Jan 30, 2023, 1:48:02 PM UTC
Thank you Wyv! <3 I had fun writing Quinn, hope I did him justice ^-^
It was 90% exposition before the little bit at the end that actually had to do with the "job" prompt hahaa... got a bit carried away
Wyverntoots
Jan 31, 2023, 12:40:54 AM UTC
You did!!!!
Getting carried away is fine, you conveyed the characters so well and the story flows nicely
It was 90% exposition before the little bit at the end that actually had to do with the "job" prompt hahaa... got a bit carried away
Getting carried away is fine, you conveyed the characters so well and the story flows nicely