Comment 132133
Comment ID 132133
I really loved the dynamic with Swan Song and her mother! The contrast between the conflict between their goals, but then the clear love that does exist between the two, is so nice to see! Shades of gray in relationships are so rewarding to read, because they feel so alive. Nice job! <3
I'm honestly still a bit unsure of my writing since english isn't my first language, so hearing this means a lot to me.