Comment 121976

Comment ID 121976

Colt2
Jan 30, 2022, 7:49:33 PM UTC on [Writing] Danovan Biography at Character Creation
Now that's a well written Bio. You did an awesome job of fleshing out the characters upbringing and background. The detailed description of both his physical traits and personality really bring Dan to life.

I'd be lying if I didn't chuckle to the thought of the Gnoll helping to clean out the left overs at the bakery, making a mess of himself in flower or having his fur all frazzled from the heat of the ovens. I'll definitely be reading your other entries and seeing what trouble Dan gets himself into.

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  • Ray2024
    Jan 30, 2022, 9:38:21 PM UTC
    Thank you for the compliment. This piece plays to my strengths. Your comment has sparked some ideas and I hope I can do those justice - it's exactly the sort of thing I imagine is intended in an "other art" submission, seeing life before adventure.