Comment 121980
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Now that's a well written Bio. You did an awesome job of fleshing out the characters upbringing and background. The detailed description of both his physical traits and personality really bring Dan to life.
I'd be lying if I didn't chuckle to the thought of the Gnoll helping to clean out the left overs at the bakery, making a mess of himself in flower or having his fur all frazzled from the heat of the ovens. I'll definitely be reading your other entries and seeing what trouble Dan gets himself into.
I'd be lying if I didn't chuckle to the thought of the Gnoll helping to clean out the left overs at the bakery, making a mess of himself in flower or having his fur all frazzled from the heat of the ovens. I'll definitely be reading your other entries and seeing what trouble Dan gets himself into.
Comment ID 121980
Thank you for the compliment. This piece plays to my strengths. Your comment has sparked some ideas and I hope I can do those justice - it's exactly the sort of thing I imagine is intended in an "other art" submission, seeing life before adventure.
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