Comment 107623

Hello! This design is gorgeous, but there's a few things that will need editing before we can approve them:

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• Magenta can only modify genes, not hooves or horns. Please make sure the hooves and horn are natural colors! You can achieve this by taking a color from the natural base colors ( Soil Ivory and Ebony )!

• Unders is going off-coverage near the shoulder of the left wing, on the right wing, and on the neck/muzzle! Additionally, recessive Unders ( nU ) cannot cover the topside of the wings; please fix this.

• Stripes doesn't seem to be present! Stripes are stripes pointing up or down, as seen in the guide's direction image. Please add it!

• There's two stray white dots on the left wing! Please erase them.

• Eyes can be any color except for red, pink, or purple. They're currently purple! Please fix this.

• The Crown mutation is missing! Please add it.

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There's an import information edit to be made as well:

• The Designer and species credit sections are missing! Please add them from the official template ( https://docs.google.com/document/d/12-FOGS4kg4vqK9WhAV0_re4WNojfbU_XRw-rLlgpW7o/edit?usp=sharing )

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You can find links to all the mentioned genes and guides here:
https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/Kosmos-Archive/post/2158

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Once you've made the edits, please post them to the Design Queue here:
http://www.paperdemon.com/forums/forum-art-rpg-player-trackers/5512_elafkeria-arpg-design-approval-ampamp-corrections/1

Thank you,
— Sheep 💛