Noctis Import

Hello! This design is lovely! However a few things need to be fixed about this request before we can judge it properly:

• The old designs shouldn't be removed, and new designs should be new posts. Please edit this post to contain the old design, and post a new art post with the new design.

• From what we can judge without seeing the old design:
- Crown is still missing!
- Since Magenta is recessive, it can only affect one gene. Currently, it's affecting Bleach, Stripes, and Unders; please fix this!
- The coloring is going outside of the lines around the hooves. Please fix this!

Once you've made the edits, please keep this and the older version, and post the new one in a different post. To upload the new design to Corrections, please go to the Corrections Queue, here:
https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/Kosmos-Archive/post/2720

Thank you,
— Sheep 💛

Hello! This design is gorgeous, but there's a few things that will need editing before we can approve them:

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• Magenta can only modify genes, not hooves or horns. Please make sure the hooves and horn are natural colors! You can achieve this by taking a color from the natural base colors ( Soil Ivory and Ebony )!

• Unders is going off-coverage near the shoulder of the left wing, on the right wing, and on the neck/muzzle! Additionally, recessive Unders ( nU ) cannot cover the topside of the wings; please fix this.

• Stripes doesn't seem to be present! Stripes are stripes pointing up or down, as seen in the guide's direction image. Please add it!

• There's two stray white dots on the left wing! Please erase them.

• Eyes can be any color except for red, pink, or purple. They're currently purple! Please fix this.

• The Crown mutation is missing! Please add it.

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There's an import information edit to be made as well:

• The Designer and species credit sections are missing! Please add them from the official template ( https://docs.google.com/document/d/12-FOGS4kg4vqK9WhAV0_re4WNojfbU_XRw-rLlgpW7o/edit?usp=sharing )

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You can find links to all the mentioned genes and guides here:
https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/Kosmos-Archive/post/2158

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Once you've made the edits, please post them to the Design Queue here:
http://www.paperdemon.com/forums/forum-art-rpg-player-trackers/5512_elafkeria-arpg-design-approval-ampamp-corrections/1

Thank you,
— Sheep 💛