1Prompt #3 - Spine Chilling
Portal Posi’s lab has been discovered... Draw or write about your character dealing with the spine portal robots. Your piece must include your character and a spine-shaped robot with a portal for a head.
For some reason, when eventering the lab every single light is shut off. When walking through the entrance, Myrrh runs into a metal wall. Except it's not a metal wall.
Constructive Critique requested.
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go to this link to submit it
https://www.paperdemon.com/app/g/pdarpg/events/view/680/portal-pandemonium-quest/1
let me know when that's done so i can close it again.
The rectangles/sharpness of the lines add to the futuristic effect as well.
I see you requested constructive critique, so I took another look. At the floor/wall at the bottom, with the rectangle and circle detailing, I think the lack of texture and colors in that section compared to the neighboring parts makes it stand out a little, which might not've been what you intended.
As I said though, I love this piece.
(Side note, I like Myrhh. <3 This would not surprise you if you saw my character. Elves with long hair and glasses solidarity *insert handshake emoji*)
(and aw, thank you, Fayen doesn't have much art yet because I write instead but one day...)