I love it, though the part not added to the tales after she spoke to the team and rush them on,,,,the sad end of her life in my Universe:
In the END Wonderstar watch them leave as she cough up frozen crystize blood....Will fate have it for her rebirth or Damnation? she lean back and wait as the time click as she torn apart from the inside by her power ....you know...they will be the last people she will ever see...she think of Tiol enjoying her ice cream and smile as the line on her face start to crack. She could not be happier to meet then all....
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In the END
Wonderstar watch them leave as she cough up frozen crystize blood....Will fate have it for her rebirth or Damnation? she lean back and wait as the time click as she torn apart from the inside by her power
....you know...they will be the last people she will ever see...she think of Tiol enjoying her ice cream and smile as the line on her face start to crack. She could not be happier to meet then all....