Dancing on Water

Posted Feb 3, 2006, 4:18:32 AM UTC

Well I haven't posted art in a while, so here I am.  This is something I actually started a while back, but have yet to finish for lack of time.  Well Ok, I am going to clean it up after I finish it, and yeah.  Any suggestions on anything?   Oh and yes, I am going to fix the folds.

And notice how lately NOTHING is going into the Complete category for me? lol

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  • Feb 6, 2006, 6:19:54 PM UTC
    Oh, I love the moevement you have in this. It flows so very nicely. The only bit of advice I have; the shape and movement of her ribbons matches too closely to the movement of her hair. Maybe wrapping the two ribbons behind her would work...I wouldn't sacrifice the hair though; it looks so awesome! Upsidedown
    • Feb 9, 2006, 2:23:16 PM UTC
      Thank you very much! :-D And yes, I see what you mean, I will do what I can about those two ribbons so that everything looks nice and perfect. Ok so not perfect but as close to it as I can get.

      And yes, I think I am in love with how I did the hair. Very proud, I am.

      Thank you,
      Mellie.

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