Come to Me

Posted Mar 26, 2009, 12:47:49 AM UTC

For now this is just a sketch. Not sure if I'm going to finish it. I'd like to but we'll see. Any feedback is welcome.

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ArkillianDragon
Mar 28, 2009, 9:08:45 PM UTC
Just a small crit- It took me a bit to realise that her hips are in the air, cause I thought she was flat on her stomach. I'm not sure if the lady is over weight, so take this with a grain of salt, but the stomach muscles are very important for showing where her hips go. My drawing is crap cause I don't draw chicks, but it sorta shows where I'm thinking ^^;
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- applejuice81
  Apr 18, 2009, 7:45:42 PM UTC
  I'm a little confused. She laying in her stomach so you really can't see the stomach unless you mean the side thats on the mattress.
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  ArkillianDragon
  Apr 20, 2009, 5:04:49 PM UTC
  In that case, i'd say her proportions look a bit large width wise. Up to you, but if she's meant to be slim, she'd need about 1/3 of her width taken off her. I can give a visual crit when I get home if you want
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  applejuice81
  Jun 23, 2009, 4:58:50 PM UTC
  Thank you. Sorry I have not been on very much. I appreciate the visual crit but her bady is facing the wrong way I have her facing with her back to the viewers. I'm attaching a similar piece to my original that in my sketchbook. If you want to see the original let me know.
  Thank you again. I do appreciate. I hope this helps you see what I'm portraying.
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