Survivor

First off, I'd like to say this is really pretty. I do quite like it, and would love to see how it is when it is done.

But now for critique, because you do want it.

Make the head just a tiny bit bigger. Like, the chin down a bit and widen it.

I'd lower the eye a bit, study your face in a mirror, and see how it is in relation to your nose.

Study your nose, too. See how the nose on her face looks really flat, and weirdly diamond shaped? I'd make it a bit flatter on the bottom. The, I can't remember the name of it, but the lines from the nose to mouth, don't widen like that on the face, shrink it a bit, and lighten them up. I'd do more of a shadow to show it than lines. You seem to be wanting to not do lines on this, anyway, and it would look better over all.

Move them up a bit.

Her boobs are high, I'd lower those. Boobs hang, and don't have helium in them.

Her left arm, our right, is too thin. Thicken it up. Hold your body in that pose, and look in a mirror. See how it looks? Try that.

Her waist is really too small, but that's a stylistic choice, so you can leave it, or make it wider.

For the tears in the pants, make the edges more ragged. They're really too smooth right now, and don't match your texture you have for the pants.

But! I do quite like it :3 You have a very good coloring style, and I'm really impressed with it.