You did a wonderful job on this one. The only thing I might suggest (and I am only aying it because I am an avid Great White lover) is to maybe widen his jaw line up a bit. That will give him the ferocity that Great whites have. I think his body shape and his eye looks great. Spot on! This is a very wonderful drawing for a first time. Great work, hun.
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