Comment 95370
Comment ID 95370
![[Art] I am not Worth of Your Love](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_38939_6750201da9e1398854bea78221e23f3f5ebc38ff40038.jpg)
I'm sorry you feel lonely. It can be hard to go through life feeling so isolated. You do have your Paperdemon family here to support you though.
I see you requested a critique so here I am!
Welcome to Critique Thursday!
The cell shading style came out pretty well. I think my main comment would be about composition.
The characters are really close to the bottom edge of the composition which creates a sense of "tension" in the viewer which probably wasn't desired.
I suggest either adding more whitespace around the characters or cropping in closer on them. I'd also suggest using the "rule of thirds" to help you with your compositions.
https://www.slrlounge.com/glossary/rule-of-thirds-definition/
https://expertphotography.com/improve-your-composition-the-rule-of-thirds/
I hope this helps and let me know if you have questions!
I see you requested a critique so here I am!
Welcome to Critique Thursday!
The cell shading style came out pretty well. I think my main comment would be about composition.
The characters are really close to the bottom edge of the composition which creates a sense of "tension" in the viewer which probably wasn't desired.
I suggest either adding more whitespace around the characters or cropping in closer on them. I'd also suggest using the "rule of thirds" to help you with your compositions.
https://www.slrlounge.com/glossary/rule-of-thirds-definition/
https://expertphotography.com/improve-your-composition-the-rule-of-thirds/
I hope this helps and let me know if you have questions!
Thank you for the kind words! I am happy you took time to critique my artwork :3
Thank you for the tips for the composition, I will definitely use them in the future!