Comment 77715
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Alright, candy coated critique. I CAN DO THIS REALLY 8D
I really like the background colours in this- you could maybe sharpen it up a bit, give the horizon a bit more of a defined look, and that would make it a lot more visually stimulating. Also, as a suggestion as far as composition goes, perhaps move the horizon line lower, and have the boat pointing in a different direction, maybe away from the viewer? Toss in a little rigging and a sailor to spice it up?
All in all, great start, especially on the sky. Very peaceful. I'm tempted to do my own boat scene.
I really like the background colours in this- you could maybe sharpen it up a bit, give the horizon a bit more of a defined look, and that would make it a lot more visually stimulating. Also, as a suggestion as far as composition goes, perhaps move the horizon line lower, and have the boat pointing in a different direction, maybe away from the viewer? Toss in a little rigging and a sailor to spice it up?
All in all, great start, especially on the sky. Very peaceful. I'm tempted to do my own boat scene.
Comment ID 77715
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