Don't sweat the small stuff, sweetheart. As artists, we are all our own worst critics. I think it turned out beautifully. I think the hardest request that I did was for Mallie 3's story. She wanted me to bring her characters to life and I had to imagine what they would look like. I was sweating bullets waiting to hear from her if she liked it or not. Thankfully she loved it. You are a wonderful artist with your own unique style that everyone here seems to love. Just keep doing what you're doing and you will go far with your talent. ^_^