Comment 49122

Since you've asked for a roast I'll try to give it a go... ^^;

Alright- I'm not sure your procees for doing pictures form start to finish, but I'll start with the hair- it's very wide out and the over all hair shape needs to be more upwards. You can help this alot if you draw the hair coming off his scalp- not freehand. Clothes are the same- this is why many artist prefure giving their characters eith baggy or tight clothing. I'm pretty sure you're saving as a JPEG format, as it's quite blurred on edges- PNG format is best for digetal pics That, and the picture needs to be shrunk more- it's HUGE. Shadows- you need to pic where you light sorce is- normally, I'd say his hair since he is in SS mode, but Akira never actaully said his hair glows- just that it turns golden (If it was me, I'd still make it glow though ^^)
Texture- Gokou's tail is outlined in hairynes, but not the colouring. doing flat colouring on something we know should have a hairy texture takes the belief away it doesn't need to be over the top- just roughen the shadows to have a similar texture. Also- this pose is a big of a tricky one- perhaps a visual referance may make it a bit easier on you next time- Google images= my godess. Just type in like... pose and chair and see what you find ^^

Um.... On the brighter note, the pose is a cute pose. He has an adarable expression. Just a few small things that can be done to improve it ^^ Hope it helped!!