Comment 48683

Parent Comment

Jan 8, 2007, 11:15:28 AM UTC
Very nice forshortening *applauds*. I think the hand looks fine, but if you still think it looks funny, try dotting in a little more detail on the palm. When you bend your hand like that, the head and heart lines (those two, kind of bold lines under the fingers) get even deeper, and your person's hand seems to...lack them. From the angle the hand's at, you'll probably only see a bit of a line between the ring and middle fingers, but it might make a difference. Smile

Also, is she holding something? Because if not, she's got an extra finger. What?

Comment ID 48683

[Art] Doodling
Jan 8, 2007, 12:02:11 PM UTC on [Art] Doodling
Thanks!

Yes, she's holding a pastel. Originally I had her writing on glass in front of her, but I wasn't sure how to do that with permanent marker so I scrapped it.

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  • Jan 8, 2007, 5:09:29 PM UTC
    Ah! I see now. ^^ That's an interesting idea. Well, maybe adding a little definition to the pastel wouldn't hurt. Like shading it in, to show it's a different color, or giving it a label... xD