Comment 28880

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ArkillianDragon
Apr 8, 2006, 5:48:22 PM UTC
Ohhh- like the shringan effect in the forground! It makes up for not really being able to see his eye that well. Real smooth there Smile

Comment ID 28880

[Art] Fear My Sharingan
Abbisy
Apr 8, 2006, 7:27:07 PM UTC on [Art] Fear My Sharingan
Thanks, I'm glad u noticed that, cause I didn't XD but thanx for the comment, I appreciate it ^^

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  • ArkillianDragon
    Apr 8, 2006, 7:53:51 PM UTC
    That his eye wasn't clear? Its mostly cause its small. The origanal would have it- right? Smile Whether he's doing the eye himself isn't important that much though- it's amped by the foreground. If you want him to have it, and be noticable, you'll need to make his eye colour lighter, or give the edges of the curls a bit of white to accent them Smile IT doesn't really need it though. There isn't any way I can think of to improve it ^^
    • Abbisy
      Apr 8, 2006, 8:02:13 PM UTC
      yesh, I never really thought about how ppl couldn't see his sharingan eye (which is why I thanked you, lol) And I'm glad you commented the way you did because it means ur really taking a good look at it, so I thank you for that too! ^^
      • ArkillianDragon
        Apr 8, 2006, 9:40:28 PM UTC
        I promise to every artist that I always take a good look at pictures, even if I don't understand what's in the picture to how the artist wants us to. It's hard for me though cause I like to help out everyone to make their art beter- my greatest virtue is also my vice. There has been alot of people that don't wan tto hear my crit cause I see alot in a picture. I even help artists beter than myself with my crit. I'm constantly buying books to help myself make beter pictures, and even though it doesn't always effect my pictures much, I see it in other people's art.

        Back to the point though- I always look at the whole picture as a picture and the elements of a picture. If a picture takes me more than 30 seconds to look over, then its an awesome picture. I like ones like that. Yours took more than 10 seconds Smile This is good for such a small pic ^^