Comment 156013

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YourFriendSaige
Mar 16, 2024, 8:04:18 PM UTC | Total Edits: 1 | Last edited on Mar 16, 2024 by YourFriendSaige
Oh wow! I'm going to have to read this at least one more time to make sure I caught everything - the backstory is *fascinating*, and I love how Mr. Nice Guy is experiencing it - getting drawn into it - in the strange, dark alien depths of this place!! This is a really complex narrative, and I'm so impressed by all the layers of storytelling!! <3

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AbstractAfflatus
Mar 16, 2024, 8:05:32 PM UTC on [Writing] Mr. Nice Guy Gets Slapped In the Face By Reality, A Big Sea Danger Noodle, and Lots Of Emotions
And here I thought that it was all too fast and confusing. Thanks!

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  • YourFriendSaige
    Mar 16, 2024, 8:14:24 PM UTC
    It's a lot to take in, but it's very interesting and has a sort of theme moving through the whole thing that makes me *want to keep reading as fast as I can*!!!!!