Comment 125892
Parent Comment
This turned out lovely.
I see you requested a critique. I think the sky you have in the background distracts a bit from the main focal point you have of the two characters in an embrace. Next time I'd try reducing the contrast on the background so that the main focal point can stand out more. The background uses black and white which creates a lot of contrast and thus draws a lot of attention. It helps to use some atmospheric perspective. looking at photos of snowy landscapes can help. instead of using black use a lighter grey for example.
I see you requested a critique. I think the sky you have in the background distracts a bit from the main focal point you have of the two characters in an embrace. Next time I'd try reducing the contrast on the background so that the main focal point can stand out more. The background uses black and white which creates a lot of contrast and thus draws a lot of attention. It helps to use some atmospheric perspective. looking at photos of snowy landscapes can help. instead of using black use a lighter grey for example.
Comment ID 125892
![[Art] Kiss in the Snow](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_48288_thumb_3f5212065c706f9a34c5ed67220ef0cd625db81f738bd.jpg)
There are no replies.