Comment 124774

Comment ID 124774

[Art] Bamboo Spirits
Apr 7, 2022, 6:04:44 PM UTC on [Art] Bamboo Spirits
Really cool! What kind of critique are you looking for?

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  • Apr 7, 2022, 7:24:55 PM UTC
    Anything besides the colour please! (I cant do much about the scanner, or lightness of the pencil pressing). any critique you have on perspective, posing, anatomy, background details ect? this was the first time i've put something 'infront' of the picture (the bamboo) but I really like how it looks. There is so much I need to improve on i'm at a lost of where to start really!
    • Apr 10, 2022, 7:09:11 PM UTC
      sorry for the late reply!
      The perspective of several of the characters is off. The red character on the bottom right underneath the bamboo looks the best in terms of perspective imo. But it's always good to get others opinions as well.
      Do you have the Discord app? PaperDemon has a discord server and everyone is very supportive and helpful with critique.
      Btw the foreground bamboo is really well done!
      • Apr 12, 2022, 5:55:27 PM UTC
        Thank you so much! perspective is definitely something I need to work on! I should join the PD discord for sure! thank you so much for taking the time to help and critique my work! <3 <3
        • Apr 12, 2022, 6:03:03 PM UTC
          Sure 😊.
          I really like the picture as well, it gives off Asian mythology vibes