This is Tsuzuki and Hisoka, from Yami no Matsuei (Descendents of Darkness). I have my reference floating around my room somewhere...
My disclaimer is that uh, well I don't own the characters. I'm looking at the DVDs right now, and sadly my name isn't on them. Unfortunely, some awesomeness by the name of Yoko Matsushita created the characters and plot and so on...
The song lyrics are from "Amethyst Rembrance" written by Yamada Hiroshi.
Well, I just felt like drawing the characters, and I think it came out rather nicely for this being drawn about a year ago at one in the morning. Sorry the quality of the picture is kinda...icky, but it is the best I can do for now.
eegirlee, there is no girl in this picture.
as for the art...
well uh I must say to have to agree with eegirlee you did a great job with the hair flow, however the fade out on the lyrics and them being written so small makes them next to impossible to read.
I suggest you use light colors when you plain on fading out the text and try and make it a bit bigger.
Okay-since this is a year old I can't tell what you've improved on, but I can note some problems you had then. The girl looks good, no problems there. The guy, however, looks strained; perhaps his neck is to straight or his head too far out. Overall, very nice balance. You did a good job on the flow of the hair.